The article calls it "an inflammatory title and a potentially incorrect contention" and those happen to be the two things that HN asks to be edited out of titles ("unless it is misleading or linkbait." - https://news.ycombinator.com/newsguidelines.html), I've taken a crack at shrinking the claim down to the article's actual complaint.
If there's a better (more accurate and neutral) title, preferably using representative language from the article itself, we can change it again.
If there's a better (more accurate and neutral) title, preferably using representative language from the article itself, we can change it again.